winter roses –
trying to remember
trying to forget


8 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

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    winter roses –
    trying to remember
    trying to forget

    —Mark Brager

    Wonderful work Mark! :-)

    warmest regards,

    Alan

  2. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Yes, a wonderful haiku. Thank you.

    turning the vase
    of flowers
    learning
    there are
    more roses

    Ellen
    (Bell's Letters Poet)

  3. Mary F.Ahearn Says:

    Please disregard my comment re the email address – feel really stupid as I see it's not publicly displayed. So sorry! As they say – "duh!" And yes, the haiku – which is what tinywords is all about- lovely poem, a bow to the poet indeed!
    winter rose
    the way
    he remembers her

  4. d. f. tweney Says:

    Mary, I've removed your previous comment. Thanks for letting us know you've figured it out.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    It's strange, but each time I read this I think of daisies! I think it's because 'trying to remember, trying to forget' reminds me of 'he loves me, he loves me not'!

    The fact that these are winter roses can only mean the end of something. Beautifully sad.

    marion

  6. sanjuktaa Says:

    Love this one, Mark!

  7. Mark E. Says:

    Thank you everyone for the kind comments and positive support!

    Sherry Walter: I hope I did not offend in some way?

  8. d. f. tweney Says:

    Mark — I think Sherry just posted her request here because she couldn't figure out how to use the subscribe/unsubscribe form. I've removed her message.

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