where forest was
the old map is thick
with dust


5 Responses

  1. Anna Says:

    Nice poem, I was in the forest of my village this morning and there was a lot of fog and dust – this is always a great atmosphere.

  2. madhurip Says:

    Ah, so vivid.

  3. Rijan Says:

    took me to my country life once I had.

  4. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Wonderful haiku

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Made me think of 'Here be dragons' for some reason! Nice. :)

    marion

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