an irregular pulse
earlier each year
bluebirds


6 Responses

  1. Lynne Says:

    Such a tender juxtaposition.

  2. Darina Says:

    Really nice – thanks for this

  3. Sheila Sondik Says:

    I'm rereading this on Earth Day. Powerful.

  4. haikuapprentice Says:

    Finely observed and perfectly executed Jean.

    Wonderful haiku for drawing attention to these irregular seasons

    And as as a medical practitioner, I love the allusion to subtle symptoms of future illness.

    Strider

  5. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Dear Jean, Thank you. I remember looking out the window for days when in recovery from an illness. Your poem says so much.

    bluebirds
    truly so blue
    trustworthy friends

    Blessings, Ellen

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I seemed to skip line 1 on first reading and and saw our changing planet, but then was pulled back up to it and zoomed right into the heartbeat. Very effective.

    marion

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