writing
a
haiku
the
bottom
drops
out

 


6 Responses

  1. Bruce Feingold Says:

    Wonderful wordsmithing and visual/concrete haiku and could feel it in my breath and stomach!

  2. payal aggarwal Says:

    Beautiful constructed haiku.

    first
    winning
    haiku
    shroud
    her
    last
    smile

  3. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    Yes, this is exquisite. I love haiku that use the word "haiku," but I've never been able to write one myself that I feel is authentic. Yours, Robert, is authentic and…well, as I said, exquisite.

  4. Dianne Says:

    very nice

  5. snakypoet Says:

    LOL

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love it! :)

    writer's block
    once again, our cat walks through
    my haiku

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