kite string
the hum of the wind
in my hand


9 Responses

  1. snakypoet Says:

    Oh, nice! You've given me the whole experience. :)

  2. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Beautiful!

  3. Heather Butler Says:

    Marvellous sensuousness in this haiku! I love how the third line works as an ending for both the second line and the first line. Wonderful.

  4. Alison H. Says:

    Marvelous! Great sensory impact. Thanks for sharing this.

  5. Garry Eaton Says:

    Thanks all for your appreciative comments. Most gratifying.

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    kite string
    the hum of the wind
    in my hand

    —GARRY EATON

    Always a well-written haiku from Mr Eaton.

    I like the turnarounds in senses.

    warm regards,
    Alan

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This is great – I could relate to it immediately :)

    marion

  8. Susan Burch Says:

    Wonderful!

  9. Garry Eaton Says:

    Really appreciate all the positive feedback. It feels like a kite string in my mind!

    Garry

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