making
a long story short
fall


5 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    making
    a long story short
    fall

    —ELMEDIN KADRIC

    Very clever writing, it could be an Autumn haiku, or a story that falls flat not just in the telling but the untruths behind it, whether in the 'Fall' aka Autumn or not.

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    startling, moving

  3. Frances Sinderwahl Says:

    long lifetime cut short a fall

  4. Peter Newton Says:

    an effective interplay of 6 singular words
    that are common phrases
    broken down by line breaks:
    a long story short
    the shortfall of fall
    how abbreviated life sometimes feels

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love how one can weave all sorts of narratives out of this. Very nice.

    marion

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