Very clever writing, it could be an Autumn haiku, or a story that falls flat not just in the telling but the untruths behind it, whether in the 'Fall' aka Autumn or not.
an effective interplay of 6 singular words
that are common phrases
broken down by line breaks:
a long story short
the shortfall of fall
how abbreviated life sometimes feels
July 10th, 2014 at 8:58 am
making
a long story short
fall
—ELMEDIN KADRIC
Very clever writing, it could be an Autumn haiku, or a story that falls flat not just in the telling but the untruths behind it, whether in the 'Fall' aka Autumn or not.
July 10th, 2014 at 10:23 am
startling, moving
July 10th, 2014 at 10:45 pm
long lifetime cut short a fall
July 11th, 2014 at 11:29 am
an effective interplay of 6 singular words
that are common phrases
broken down by line breaks:
a long story short
the shortfall of fall
how abbreviated life sometimes feels
July 22nd, 2014 at 12:44 pm
I love how one can weave all sorts of narratives out of this. Very nice.
marion