tapping trail dust
from the harmonica . . .
twilight stars


12 Responses

  1. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Wonderful haiku. From the trail to the stars, and with music. Thank you.

  2. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    Such beautifully captured sensory images! Absolutely lovely! :)

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Well, when you are gifted by a Chad Lee Robinson haiku you know it will take you on a journey that will stay with you a long time.

    Robinson somehow makes us have an incredible tale by our own fireside, but we still get to taste his part of the world:

    tapping trail dust
    from the harmonica . . .
    twilight stars

    —CHAD LEE ROBINSON

    And a wonderful alliterative boost adds to the musicality of the piece.

    warm regards,

    Alan, With Words

  4. smilealong2013 Says:

    Thank you. It's magical.

  5. Linda Long Says:

    Thank you. It’s magical.

  6. Ronald Grognet Says:

    a strain of music
    across the hills
    harmony

  7. JoeMcKeon Says:

    Excellent work! I can feel the warmth of the campfire and smell the herd not far away!
    Keep playing for us! Joe

  8. haikuapprentice Says:

    You know you reading a truly great haiku when you are literally pulled into a different place and time. So it is with this poem.

    Chad Lee Robinson delivers us into his world through this rich, multi-sensory poem. The smell of the dust, the open horizon with the twilight stars first appearing, and the sounds… oh the musicality of the sounds. Chad literally invites us to "tap" along with him as he conjures a virtual campfire and plays for us on his harmonica. Magical poem.

    Strider

  9. snakypoet Says:

    I'm there!

  10. Paresh Says:

    tapping trail dust
    from the harmonica . . .
    twilight stars

    what transpires in this haiku is truly magical without making it cynical even in the slightest way. The haiku has almost been plucked out of a Neil Gaiman universe. What you treat us here with is a lasting legacy of a delicately unfolding magic.

  11. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I can hear the blues! Lovely :)

    marion

  12. Barbara Kaufmann Says:

    Many layers to ponder and enjoy. A poem to reread and savor!

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