circling
a word find—
the end of summer


10 Responses

  1. Julie Warther Says:

    "Circling" is a wonderful first line! Yes, there is a sense of completeness, satisfaction even. Until, of course, we look up and move on to the next activity. And we're circling again.

    summer's end in Ohio
    we follow it
    south

  2. haikuapprentice Says:

    This is great Tish. Yesterday I commented on the power of the perfect descriptive word. Today we enjoy the reverse. You've deliberately eschewed the obvious and therefore perhaps clichéd season word, but have allowed us to "word find" it for ourselves. As Julie says, this gives its own satisfaction, and we the reader actually share the emotional experience of the activity described. I really enjoyed this. Brilliantly done.

    Strider

  3. تحميل برامج Says:

    Really shiny tiny words :)

  4. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    I love how this one, for me, alludes to the things we search for in life, and the discoveries we make along the way, the endings and beginnings, the cycle of life. A beautiful mix of meanings. :)

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Yes, circling is an inspired choice of verb here.

    marion

  6. تيوب ميت Says:

    Yes

  7. تحميل تيوب ميت Says:

    I don't know but I liked the place here. Bazinga!

  8. nassim Says:

    tnx
    molenapp.com

  9. Jenn Says:

    Kewl you should come up with that. Exeltlenc!

  10. Adam J. Steve Says:

    Thanks for sharing .. liked it (y)

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