Autumn chill
the sound of the wind
on its way to the sea


5 Responses

  1. Norah Says:

    Beautiful! I can really feel, hear and see this. Thank you.

    Norah

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    Autumn chill
    the sound of the wind
    on its way to the sea

    —SYLVIA FORGES-RYAN

    *

    The author is a craftsperson, every word is dovetailed to give maximum resonance.

    Sheer beauty.

    warmest regards,

    Alan

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    The sound of this haiku is almost hypnotic, like the rise and fall of the wind and waves. Wonderful.

    marion

  4. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    So well crafted and captures the senses completely! Beautiful! :)

  5. Candie Says:

    It’s great to read something that’s both enjoyable and provides prtasgaimdc solutions.

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