crumbs
on her lips
the secret’s out

 


8 Responses

  1. kathefain Says:

    I love this, on a diet so it particularly resonates with me. I am impressed how very few words can bring powerful images to mind.

  2. Maria Morales Says:

    Love this….. Congratulations Edna! Well done!

  3. Norah Says:

    Love this too! Thanks for sharing it here.
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    Norah

  4. Constance Currie Says:

    Love it._

  5. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    Well done, Edna! So happy to see your work here on tinywords! :)

  6. Eddie Says:

    best i've seen in a long time

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Hahahaha – calorie counting at the minute, so this really resonates! Thank you for sharing :)

    marion

  8. Timothy Hicks Says:

    Impressively short and comical – the diet plan didn't work out too well it seems!

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