doll’s house
pieces of my childhood
come together


3 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    doll’s house
    pieces of my childhood
    come together

    —SHLOKA SHANKAR

    Wonderful and intriguing. :-)

    *

    Forgotten rain
    the wedding ring left
    in a doll’s house

    Alan Summers
    ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK (Japan, 2014)

    .

  2. Kala Ramesh Says:

    Shloka,

    I love this.
    Ha! Childhood memories. . . yes, they do come together in many times.

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love doll house ku! I can see the writer as an adult looking at her old childhood toy as memories come flooding back – though 'pieces' has a slight edge to it, so they may not all be good.

    Very strong writing, Shloka.

    marion

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