midnight foghorn
slow heartbeat
of the dark harbor

 


11 Responses

  1. Hana Says:

    Beautiful!

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    midnight foghorn
    slow heartbeat
    of the dark harbor

    —JOY REED MACVANE

    Deeply atmospheric!

    *

    autumn drizzle
    the sheen of boatlights
    on flattened dockwater

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Azami #31 (Japan 1996); micropress yates (Queensland, Australia, March 1997)

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  3. Joy MacVane Says:

    Hi Alan, I appreciated your words. Thanks for sharing them.

  4. Alison Hedlund Says:

    Wonderful sonorous quality! I feel the misty mystery.

  5. Joy MacVane Says:

    Thank you ….. Casco Bay, Maine – a favorite place.

  6. Alison Hedlund Says:

    A universal haiku…I live in Port Townsend, Washington–all the shipping traffic goes by here–though we have only a small harbor.

  7. Joy MacVane Says:

    Hi Alison, thanks for the comment. Harbors are all amazing, aren't they? Casco Bay in Maine was my inspiration.

  8. Joy MacVane Says:

    Thank you, Hana!

  9. Danny Davis Says:

    Thank you.
    Well sensed!

  10. Gisele LeBlanc Says:

    I love the sensory elements! The moment comes alive. :)

  11. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Living next to a port here in Ireland I can really appreciate this one.

    marion

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