Bukowski in bed
all that heartache and grit
between the sheets
the way words touch me
the way they don’t


12 Responses

  1. th. vandergrau Says:

    A reading experience well described – I like it!

  2. pdfrench Says:

    Excellent!

  3. Myke Todd Says:

    This is some serious hit or miss. Love it!

  4. Eva Jonsby Says:

    Amusing!

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Jennifer Thompson is one of our most exciting writers of haiku and tanka.

    Bukowski in bed
    all that heartache and grit
    between the sheets
    the way words touch me
    the way they don’t

    —JENNIFER THOMPSON

    Another impressive (tanka) poem from this author.

    warm regards,

    Alan, With Words

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ha – excellent, Jennifer! :)

    marion

  7. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Myke Todd is just right -; Stimulatingly ambiguous, for the Bukowski lovers or haters.

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  9. Jennifer Thompson Says:

    Thank you all very much!

  10. madhurip Says:

    Incisive! Great tanka, thank you.

  11. janetld Says:

    I enjoyed reading this!

  12. bеst еssay au Says:

    Teachers should give the feedback to the students after finishing the lecture. They should evaluate the performance of the students in class participation. They should notice how much students involve in class discussion.

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