turning the paper
to first light
lone commuter


14 Responses

  1. Christopher Pickslay Says:

    I love this image Bill. My commute inspires many haiku.

    subway ride
    her thoughts carry her
    past her stop

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Very nice. Modestly very effective. It gives me the rare feeling of the haiku world of Issa etc. being fluidly transposed into the modern world

  3. David Smedley Says:

    I like the thought of both the physical and mental journey.

    opening to first light
    paper thin
    spring leaf

  4. Pravat Says:

    A lovely haiku!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    A quiet haiku. Lovely.

    marion

  6. johan kery Says:

    i think it will be a good proof for the visiter people and good for reading

  7. th. vandergrau Says:

    Modern setting, but feels timeless. Nice!

  8. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Beautiful haiku. Thank you.

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