bonfire smoke
we talk about
our disappointments


11 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    A senryu that paints so well what should be done, much more often… communication.
    _m

  2. Lynne Says:

    Thank you!

  3. th. vandergrau Says:

    To sit together around a fire brings nearness, yet I can feel a tang of bitterness in the smoke …

  4. Lynne Says:

    Yes, that shift of mood/feeling was what I wanted to suggest. Thank you.

  5. ormanarlington Says:

    Just lovely.

  6. Lynne Says:

    Thank you : )

  7. Paul Heinowski Says:

    I think haiku are all about surprises and of course disappointments. You can just imagine your fond expectations going up in smoke!

  8. Lynne Says:

    Yes! Thanks for seeing that dichotomy.

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This is great. There is an element of acceptance, despite the disappointments.

    marion

  10. Lynne Says:

    Thanks, Marion.

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