withered vines—
stringing winter into
a rosary

 


10 Responses

  1. Lynne Says:

    Lovely sounds in this haiku that 'string' it together tightly – assonance in: with… string… winter… int… and even the eye rhyme with vines. And 'rosary' has an emotionally satisfying rhythm to it too. Really like it.

  2. pbergonzi Says:

    Ya.

  3. Susan Botich Says:

    Very nicely done! Beautiful music to this haiku, strong imagery, and resonant feeling behind the piece.

  4. Sheila Sondik Says:

    I love the haunting visual image created here.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I love this – it has a very Gothic feel.

    marion

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    withered vines—
    stringing winter into
    a rosary

    —SONDRA BYRNES
    .
    Very vivid!

    warmest regards,

    Alan

  7. th. vandergrau Says:

    A very well crafted poem!

  8. joolo Says:

    hmm, dont know what to say

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