rain timpani
against the downspout —
a charm of finches

 


10 Responses

  1. Matt Says:

    Beautiful. Thanks for the finches and the rain!

  2. shirley weese Says:

    Love this, a charm of finches is delightful !!!

  3. Magyar Says:

    Grand. Here, the Forsythia are now in harmony_.

  4. Joanna M. Weston Says:

    One of the lovelier collective nouns: charm of finches. And a delightful haiku.

  5. Theresa C. Says:

    Thanks Shirley, Magyar, Matt and Joanna! It's wonderful to read your comments and know that you enjoyed my haiku.

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Amazingly, I have just read a haiku minutes ago that also features a charm of finches – they get everywhere, those birds! I love the rain timpani against the downspout – great use of audio.

    marion

  7. sanjuktaa Says:

    Beautiful! Love the sounds here.

  8. purehaiku Says:

    enjoyed the audio and visual impact of this poem

  9. joolo Says:

    love this one

  10. Keyon Says:

    1b8Hello,I am very interested in joining the United States Marine Corps after college, and I am a long distance runner. I had a case of &#ru;02r2nne8s knee” and it went away …now my knee feels weird, doesn’t hurt, just weird. I can still run without pain and do everything. I was wondering if I joined, and I went to a physical therapist will the Marine Corps Disqualify me?

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