box of old letters …
from a distance
the owl still sounds close

 


11 Responses

  1. Jean LeBlanc Says:

    I am in my office grading research papers and I needed to see something deep and meaningful and beautiful and surprising, so I came to tinywords and saw your haiku, and now I have the strength to go on…

  2. Helen Buckingham Says:

    My godmother loved owls. I love/d my godmother. I love your ku.

    an owl hoots
    …the night plays dead

    (3rd Place, 16th Kusamakura Award, 2011)

  3. Pravat Says:

    Interesting one with beautiful ku.

  4. Magyar Says:

    moonlight walk; as I trip on my shadow; an owl laughs

    >letters, from a distance… the owl sounds close<
    __Joy, your fine words promote this feeling, the memories, are much more near_!

  5. Janet Says:

    Very effective!

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    late deadline
    keeping owl hours
    with the mice

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)

  7. th. vandergrau Says:

    Surprises me …

  8. Vetori Says:

    Wonderful post dear. Thanks for sharing with us.

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This is beautiful, Joy.

    Perhaps because I've been experimenting with four line haiku recently, I kind of want 'sounds close' to drop to a fourth line. That way you have that wonderful line 'the owl still'. Just a thought.

    marion

  10. Nokia Says:

    nice post dear dmin

  11. PC Suite downloaf Says:

    Good work Admin

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