idling
on the driveway
my anger

 


10 Responses

  1. th. vandergrau Says:

    Very much to the point – a fine senryu!

  2. Paul Heinowski Says:

    Whether you are going or coming, your anger has overtaken you and taken you over for a few moments. I feel I can empathise with this poem.

  3. Madhu Pillai Says:

    Succinct, beautifully expressed

  4. madhurip Says:

    Beautifully expressed.

  5. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    Beautifully portrayed.

  6. Magyar Says:

    Our silent powers that regain our senses of morality, and civility. _m

  7. Dave Read Says:

    Thanks everyone. I appreciate your positive comments.

  8. chief276 Says:

    Lovely* moment

    Bill Kenney

    *By which I mean, beautifully ugly.

  9. Dave Read Says:

    LOL! That cracked me up. And thanks.

  10. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wow! Very effective.

    marion

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