in between
your life and mine
a wilderness of brambles


6 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m

    dreams step
    into the limb-lace shadows
    sunrise

  2. Marie Shimane Says:

    The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems"

    Within your life and mine
    there lives
    a cherry blossom

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this.

    Marion

  4. th.vandergrau Says:

    A familiar predicament acutely expressed – very nice!

  5. dawn apanius Says:

    Beautiful.

  6. Mohsin Says:

    bit cheezy

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