in between your life and mine a wilderness of brambles
—Joy Reed MacVane
Issue 15.1 | 18 May 2015
Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m
dreams step into the limb-lace shadows sunrise
The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems"
Within your life and mine there lives a cherry blossom
Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this.
Marion
A familiar predicament acutely expressed – very nice!
Beautiful.
bit cheezy
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May 18th, 2015 at 9:13 am
Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m
dreams step
into the limb-lace shadows
sunrise
May 18th, 2015 at 1:09 pm
The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems"
Within your life and mine
there lives
a cherry blossom
May 19th, 2015 at 3:03 pm
Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this.
Marion
May 21st, 2015 at 1:24 pm
A familiar predicament acutely expressed – very nice!
May 22nd, 2015 at 5:49 pm
Beautiful.
July 12th, 2015 at 12:48 am
bit cheezy