how long
can a robin hold its song
in autumn
my late father’s words
stirring my soul


10 Responses

  1. kalaramesh Says:

    Nicely worded, Ramesh

  2. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Thanks Kala!

  3. Magyar Says:

    Heartful Tanka.
    _m

  4. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Thanks Magyar!

  5. Pravat Says:

    Nicely composed.

  6. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Thanks Pravat!

  7. Marie Shimane Says:

    Very touching — and the placement of 'in autumn' is extremely effective. Well done!

  8. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Thanks Marie!

  9. Joshua Paul Bocher Says:

    Very moving tanka!

  10. Ramesh Anand Says:

    Thanks Joshua!

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