cloudburst …
my son adds his voice
to the rumble


12 Responses

  1. Pravat Says:

    Beautiful Ku. A haiku with substance!

  2. haikuapprentice Says:

    How nice to see another poem by Paresh. I enjoy the observations of very "ordinary" human experiences in his work – in spirit akin to Buson.

    From the abruptness of the opening to the closing word "rumble", I detect and enjoy a sense of playfulness, and everyday familial humour. Life is full of such moments, and we are all the richer when a poet like Paresh helps us learn to see and capture the poetry of them.

    Strider

  3. kalaramesh Says:

    Very nicely captured moment, Paresh

  4. th. vandergrau Says:

    Very good!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I could hear the child complaining that he can't go out to play because of the weather. Well observed and crafted, Paresh.

    marion

  6. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    cloudburst …
    my son adds his voice
    to the rumble

    —PARESH TIWARI
    .
    The wonder of a child connecting to the important and natural things in life. Magical.
    .
    .
    a girl in a stone the big ask for clouds to be more bluer

    [monostich]

    Alan Summers
    Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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