end of story
you peel your tangerine
in one continuous piece


10 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Superb clash of imagery, making me wonder so much about the in-between the lines, and outside of the lines into actual events:

    end of story
    you peel your tangerine
    in one continuous piece

    —OLIVIER SCHOPFER

    Such an effective first line, and sublime phrase in those last two lines.

    Alan

  2. Olivier Schopfer Says:

    Thank you very much, Alan. As always, your words mean a lot to me.

  3. Magyar Says:

    Love-it, Olivier_!
    __Oh yes… it can be done, then wound back into a hollow echo… as is mine below. Smiles _!
    _m

    this reset
    an empty tangerine peal
    fragrance lingers

  4. Olivier Schopfer Says:

    Thanks a lot, Magyar. Glad to inspire you ;-)

  5. sharon Says:

    Such defiance! Lovely.

  6. Olivier Schopfer Says:

    Thank you, Sharon.

  7. Karen Says:

    once again
    your tiny words
    delight
    kh

    Lovely poem Oliver

  8. Tash Adams Says:

    This is so cool! Great imagery. Why didn't I think of that :)

  9. Olivier Schopfer Says:

    Thank you so much, Natasha. Happy to read your website, love "autumn wind".

  10. philaloan Says:

    This work with deep meaning and lot of symbols. Big things like life can be shown in little things. You have develop imaginary to combine things like that.

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