late summer mating dragonflies extend each other
—Ernest Wit
Issue 15.2 | 9 September 2015
I simply love this one, Ernest! :)
marion
Yes, a philosophical love haiku! Gorgeous.
Wow. Some haiku are such perfection one should simply sit quietly in admiration. For me, this is such a haiku. Breathtaking. Thank you Ernest, for sharing it. I look forward to enjoying more of your work in the future.
Strider
As for me, the last line is too earthly in comparison with the previous two (?) I would end as "will see each other no more"
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September 9th, 2015 at 9:19 am
I simply love this one, Ernest! :)
marion
September 9th, 2015 at 5:47 pm
Yes, a philosophical love haiku! Gorgeous.
September 21st, 2015 at 1:42 pm
Wow. Some haiku are such perfection one should simply sit quietly in admiration.
For me, this is such a haiku.
Breathtaking.
Thank you Ernest, for sharing it. I look forward to enjoying more of your work in the future.
Strider
September 28th, 2015 at 4:06 am
As for me, the last line is too earthly in comparison with the previous two (?) I would end as "will see each other no more"