last rites. . .
rain fading into
bird song

 

 

(Received 1st Place in the 2015 Betty Drevniok Award)


6 Responses

  1. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    Perfect!

  2. Carole MacRury Says:

    It looks just as perfect to me today, Carl. Wonderful haiku. I hope you enjoyed my comments on it.

  3. M. Shayne Bell Says:

    Beautiful, memorable haiku. Well done.

  4. kalaramesh Says:

    Most poignant, Carl.

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Ah – lovely! :)

    marion

  6. pdfrench Says:

    Beautiful piece!

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