twilight
losing count
of blackberries

 


9 Responses

  1. norah Says:

    How beautiful. Thank you.

  2. meredith Says:

    lovely! i love the depths of darkness in this haiku.

  3. Kasah Says:

    genius!

  4. Annette Makino Says:

    As a dedicated blackberry picker, I love this one. Really lovely.

  5. Madhuri Says:

    Lovely!

  6. @andreochka Says:

    Simple and well crafted… I really love this.

  7. Ben Moeller-Gaa Says:

    Thanks for all the nice comments everyone! Glad you enjoyed the poem.

  8. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Really beautiful.

    marion

  9. hammerandtongs Says:

    Wish I was there so gorging on blackberries that I lose count.

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