she waves a thin blue scarf becoming sky
Issue 15.2 | 15 October 2015
Gorgeous and transporting haiku! The reader can assume so many different cuts — each one satisfying and a bit mysterious.
Good one Lorin!
three sheets to the wind
Dear Lorin, A lovely poem. Thank you.
Still love your style Lorin. Fabulous work!
Oh what a beautiful haiku!
Definitely one for my notebook of favorites. Superb!
So beautiful, Lorin – endlessly evocative – at once saddening and uplifting. I go along with Dawn in that it's one of my favourite ku of late, I just keep returning to it…..
Light and graceful. I especially enjoyed the experience of the self and the scarf
blending into "nature"
Beautiful, Lorin – so visual.
Love the touch of nostalgia in this haiku, Lorin!
Beautiful, evocative, transforming.
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