clouds gone the clarity of shadows

 


9 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    summer skies
    pillows on blue
    along the long trail

  2. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Clouds gone,
    The charity of Shadows

  3. janewilliams Says:

    clouds leave us to face our own shadows

  4. Georgia Kornbluth Says:

    shadows speak louder than clouds

  5. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Nice.

  6. Georgia Kornbluth Says:

    clouds of falling leaves
    break the fall of rain
    as shadows fail

  7. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Nice again.

  8. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Love the subtle irony of this haiku.

    (Also coming to Canberra soon for a month. Would enjoy hearing your bush trail recommendations. See my website for contact info.)

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    Terrific!

    clouds gone the clarity of shadows

    —JAN DOBB
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    A Queensland poem:

    Cunningham’s Lookout
    a nankeen kestrel’s outline
    against cloud

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: Azami #31 (1996)

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