the brittle call
of a skylark –
still no rain


5 Responses

  1. Janice Campbell Says:

    Really appreciate the word "brittle."

    seed parachutes
    onto unwatered ground—
    a fruitless journey

  2. Magyar Says:

    Your haiku, Vincent, generated another look within that hopeful sky _m

    the hawk soars
    below this skyborn gate
    a rain cloud

  3. janewilliams Says:

    The word 'brittle' is an excellent choice to echo the dry season or drought, a really lovely haiku.

    black cockatoos
    coming down from the hills
    unseasonal rain

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh, yes – brittle is an inspired word here.

    marion

  5. Vincent O'Connor Says:

    Hi,

    Thank you all for your very kind words.
    It was a huge honour for me to be included in Tinywords.

    Vincent.

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