the brittle call
of a skylark –
still no rain
Issue 15.2 | 9 November 2015
Really appreciate the word "brittle."
onto unwatered ground—
a fruitless journey
Your haiku, Vincent, generated another look within that hopeful sky _m
the hawk soars
below this skyborn gate
a rain cloud
The word 'brittle' is an excellent choice to echo the dry season or drought, a really lovely haiku.
coming down from the hills
Oh, yes – brittle is an inspired word here.
Thank you all for your very kind words.
It was a huge honour for me to be included in Tinywords.
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