shrieking gull falling from a cliff this fear of flying
Issue 15.2 | 8 December 2015
I feel the image & like it!
circles the pond
Delighted this works for you, Mike.
I like your mute swan also :)
The repetition of the -ing, so often regarded as a no-no, is exactly right here.
Thanks, Bill. I had hoped it would work here – so pleased you think it has! :)
The repetition of the “f” sound makes this a lovely read. Nicely done Marion!
coastal cliff the flap of wings before waves
Thanks so much for commenting, Lamart. :)
Nice monostich, by the way!
A vivid piece, Marion. Effective alliteration. I can feel fear!
Thank you, Theresa. :)
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