talking done
the dregs of friendship
in our mugs

 


9 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    I like your haiku!

    coffee

    the think

    drink

  2. Betty Shropshire Says:

    Love the play on mugs!

  3. chief276 Says:

    A powerful mood piece.

    reunion –
    that old argument
    he still remembers

    Bill Kenney

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wow – the word 'dregs' says it all, Rach. A really strong ku. I can feel both anger and sadness in this one. Well done. :)

    marion

  5. janewilliams Says:

    long distance call –
    straining to listen
    between the lines

  6. Magyar Says:

    Dregs; the kigo Autumn… nifty_!

    rain ends
    lemonade in our glasses
    crickets talk

    _m

  7. marykendall Says:

    Rachel, as always you get it just right.

  8. Shivaun Says:

    One more cup of coffee for the road? Em, only joking. This is so good.

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    talking done
    the dregs of friendship
    in our mugs

    —RACHEL SUTCLIFFE

    Gosh, a short story in its own right. It feels incredibly sad, and potentially a meeting to mend things but ending up finishing things for good.
    .
    .

    pint mug of tea
    all my childhood
    in bookcovers

    Alan Summers
    haijinx volume IV, issue 1 (2011)
    .

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