sleepless —
my window floats through a thousand
                    stars

7 Responses

  1. Lolly Says:

    This haiku is magical. Well done.

  2. Norah Says:

    Love this. So beautifully apt.

  3. upinvermont Says:

    My thanks to both of you. :-) Starting November 7th, and inspired by —I'm not sure what—I've undertaken writing one haiku a day through November of next year. One a day. More haibun than haiku I suppose.

  4. Barbara Kaufmann Says:

    Yes!

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    Lovely style!
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    Tribute to John O'connor 1949-2015

    stars fail to break
    as long as the sand
    & moonlight

    haiku by Alan Summers
    n.b.
    the last two lines are from John's poem Mother & Child (Tiny Gaps, NZPS, 2003)
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  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    This captures well for me that 'not quite there' feeling when you are on the brink of sleep.

    marion

  7. Dawn Says:

    I love it too.

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