after the contrail
Issue 15.2 | 20 January 2016
I ♡ your starlight poem.
pillows on blue
along the long trail
__Rachel, I step back to a more familiar time with this, my complementary echo to your nifty senryu. A metaphoric contrail… the lantern at the caboose. Thanks. _m
the last train
leaves a darkened depot
The transience of everything – beautiful, Rachel. x
I came across a website that is focused on discussing the value of traditional college degrees in the American educational system.
Beautiful description. The contrail vaporizes, is gone, the starlight remains.
Final departure? is the contrail a metaphor for human life?
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