grace . . .
the one whose eyes
are opened

 


14 Responses

  1. Jennifer Thompson Says:

    Beautiful…

  2. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Yes, beautiful

  3. Valentina Says:

    nice

  4. MaryJo Says:

    Julie,
    Ah, yes. Something completely unexpected.

  5. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Thank you!

  6. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    Beautiful!

  7. lamartcooper Says:

    A pure sense of wonder in these words which makes multiple enjoyable reads a must!

    Well done!

  8. haikuapprentice Says:

    Beautiful haiku Julie. I love how you have captured in the very composition of the verse the sense of breathless wonder that comes from such an unexpected gift. But I also sense a purposeful determination in the movement from the second to third lines – the appropriate expression of true gratitude. Very well done!

    Strider

  9. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Silently beautiful.

    marion

  10. Bobby Says:

    Interesting…

  11. Julie Warther Says:

    Thanks, All. It's very affirming to have particularly personal poems touch others as well.

  12. marykendall Says:

    A perfect haiku. Thank you for this gift.

  13. martin1223 Says:

    Pwo chants*
    through the rising swell
    the night sky

    *Google Pwo, Mau Piailug, and go to hokulea.com

  14. hammerandtongs Says:

    In the acceptance of all lies grace.

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