visitor sign-in
the unrelenting cheerfulness
of daffodils

 


8 Responses

  1. pbergonzi Says:

    How cute and clever!
    You cheered and brightened my day–
    Like a daffodil.

  2. Helen Buckingham Says:

    variegated tulips
    the receptionist's smile
    equally forced

    (A Hundred Gourds 1.1)

  3. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    Lovely!

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Difficult not to smile, Cherie. Nice. :)

    marion

  5. lamartcooper Says:

    Flowers have a way of putting a smile on the face, even when faced with less than cheerful circumstances. A beautiful expression of sentiment!

  6. haikuapprentice Says:

    Lovely haiku Cherie. I particularly enjoy the strikingly unexpected juxtaposition in the middle line. And it seems to me you have also cleverly matched the format of your verse to the underlying message – you have subverted the "classical" haiku format with 17 syllables, so instead of 5-7-5 you have "over-stretched" the middle line to 8 syllables – a syntactic match for the unrelenting (I read "forced") cheerfulness of the daffodils. Brilliantly and subtly done.

    Strider

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