Caribbean cruise
getting away
with all these people

 


6 Responses

  1. Bob Lucky Says:

    Nice. Similar in tone to George Swede's 'alone at last' but with a twist in the other direction.

  2. magyar Says:

    __Jeannie, your nifty verse has generated this, my contrary view; a lone race with the clouds. I thank you. _m

    a kayak
    scuds across this silent pond
    low clouds

  3. MaryJo Says:

    Nice Jeannie.

    I didn't think of it, but I agree with Bob Lucky. The tone is similar but for sure a twist in the other direction. Thanks to both of you.

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    The irony in this one made me smile. :)

    marion

  5. hammerandtongs Says:

    Sure the irony that other posters have mentioned.

    Could also read it as–the poet is getting away on a Caribbean cruise, and there are all these people also getting away, each one from the circumstance of his/her life.

  6. Dolly Says:

    This is way better than a brick & mortar essmnlithaebt.

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