—Jeannie Martin
Issue 16.1 | 2 May 2016
Nice. Similar in tone to George Swede's 'alone at last' but with a twist in the other direction.
__Jeannie, your nifty verse has generated this, my contrary view; a lone race with the clouds. I thank you. _m
a kayak scuds across this silent pond low clouds
Nice Jeannie.
I didn't think of it, but I agree with Bob Lucky. The tone is similar but for sure a twist in the other direction. Thanks to both of you.
The irony in this one made me smile. :)
marion
Sure the irony that other posters have mentioned.
Could also read it as–the poet is getting away on a Caribbean cruise, and there are all these people also getting away, each one from the circumstance of his/her life.
This is way better than a brick & mortar essmnlithaebt.
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May 2nd, 2016 at 10:39 am
Nice. Similar in tone to George Swede's 'alone at last' but with a twist in the other direction.
May 2nd, 2016 at 10:48 am
__Jeannie, your nifty verse has generated this, my contrary view; a lone race with the clouds. I thank you. _m
a kayak
scuds across this silent pond
low clouds
May 2nd, 2016 at 3:05 pm
Nice Jeannie.
I didn't think of it, but I agree with Bob Lucky. The tone is similar but for sure a twist in the other direction. Thanks to both of you.
May 23rd, 2016 at 4:17 am
The irony in this one made me smile. :)
marion
May 26th, 2016 at 8:33 am
Sure the irony that other posters have mentioned.
Could also read it as–the poet is getting away on a Caribbean cruise, and there are all these people also getting away, each one from the circumstance of his/her life.
May 27th, 2016 at 5:17 am
This is way better than a brick & mortar essmnlithaebt.