so much expected
of the red snow shovel
              unless it rains

 


8 Responses

  1. hammerandtongs Says:

    Oh what a lovely take on The Red Wheelbarrow.

    "so much depends
    upon

    a red wheel
    barrow

    glazed with rain
    water

    besides the white
    chickens"

  2. hammerandtongs Says:

    Love how you have swiftly turned the thought around from rain water as a glaze on the red wheelbarrow to rain as the agent that clears the snow.

  3. MaryJo Says:

    Love your take on The Red Wheelbarrow. Lovely.

  4. Garry Says:

    so much depends
    on the postman
    with the little red wagon
    -not WCW

  5. ronaldjscully Says:

    Thank you, thank WCW .

  6. Valentina Says:

    I like the little twist at the end.

  7. Magyar Says:

    __The red snow shovel may not be needed; it's important, when we discover the importance of being unimportant.
    _m

  8. ken smith Says:

    so much depends on
    a green burial barrow
    to honor the dead

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