thunderheads
I can’t let go
of my argument


5 Responses

  1. martin mikelberg Says:

    is that a typo? leg go OR let go

  2. magyar Says:

    __Typo or not, it mazes me think; we understand we must stand by our tenets… as your verse illustrates so well Bruce.
    __Leggo my eggo_? Perhaps Legos, those toy building blocks_? Smiles_!

    futile argument
    as lightning bolts strike
    toy building blocks
    _m

  3. Magyar Says:

    a/o 1515 EDT: leg, reset to let.

  4. martin1223 Says:

    blue moon
    behind the two lovers
    distant fires

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    thunder snow
    the wind-shifting scent
    of fox

    tonnerre de neige
    amenée par le vent l’odeur
    du renard

    Original haiku by Alan Summers
    French version by Serge Tome

    Publications credits:
    fox dreams (April 2012) edited by Aubrie Cox;
    and Temps Libre Coups de coeur – Favourites (Du 16 au 31 janvier 2013)
    .
    .
    gunsmoke tea
    a dog argues
    itself to death

    Alan Summers
    Publication Credits: Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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