pooling where the creek bends fish


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  1. Alan Summers Says:

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    cooling where the creek bends fish

    —DAVE READ

    Wonderful one line haiku, love where the creek bends fish!

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    soul her fish fingers to the second knuckle

    Alan Summers
    Publication Credits: Roadrunner 12.3 MASKS 4 (2012)

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    leaves begin to fall this face too evolves from fish

    Alan Summers
    From the sequence: White Dust Ghosts – a series of haiku poems
    Publication Credit: Tribe issue 22 (October 2013)
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  2. Lynne Rees Says:

    Really enjoy playing with this striking minimalist haiku. And great last word – single syllable, concrete. Just lovely.

  3. Momolu S.Freeman Says:

    Lovely

  4. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Mind bending. It has that wonderful quality of stimulating the imagination with it being possible to pin down it's meaning.

  5. Dave Read Says:

    Thanks everyone! I am grateful for your kind comments.

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love it, Dave! :)

    marion

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