first stars…
I turn the sand out
of my pockets


7 Responses

  1. Stanford m. Forrester Says:

    Simply a fantastic poem. No need to say more.

  2. andreacecon Says:

    Excellent poem!

  3. marykendall Says:

    Lovely!

  4. Norman Darlington Says:

    Very powerful, Agnes. You have the gift of making it look easy!

  5. Peter Newton Says:

    definitely sets the mind loose on its imagining

  6. Jan Benson Says:

    Lovely
    Well done, Agnes

  7. sanjuktaa Says:

    Beautiful!

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