private beach
the kids build
an ivory tower


4 Responses

  1. Jan Benson Says:

    E. K.
    One of my new favorite haijin.
    This one is innovative, yet lovely.
    Thank you for being.
    Jan Benson

  2. Elmedin Kadric Says:

    Such a beautiful thing to say, Jan. You’ve made my day. Thank you!

  3. Allison Says:

    I'm sorry EK. I'm reading this literally, and it creates a very sad and morbid scene for me on the issue of ivory poaching. I'm not sure this is what you were aiming for?

  4. janewilliams Says:

    Even on a private beach kids are full of wonder, building towers, perhaps dreaming of elsewhere …

    shared sandpit
    the neighbour's kids
    add a moat

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