one cicada becoming another deep summer
Issue 16.2 | 20 September 2016
Love the simplicity and depth of this one Lawrence.
love how you captured the sound of summer–
Celebrates a new start
Though sings an end
Ahhhh, the beginning of another summer day – I can feel the rising heat
Oh that is stunningly perfect! That describes it perfectly.
I don't think we have cicadas in Ireland, just ordinary crickets, but I can imagine the sound when they all join in! The adjective 'deep' raises this monostich a notch for me. Lovely.
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