rock walls the river shapes no designated god
Issue 16.2 | 27 September 2016
Apt; feflections continue to reflect.
"r" not -f-_! Of course, I'm the only one that makes errors. Smile_! _m
Beautiful haiku, Lorin!
It sent me to the Ten Commandments right off the bat: “Thou shalt have no graven images before thee, etc.”
Nature understands the divinity better than we do.
What a universal language nature speaks in !!
Awe. That's how it feels to read your haiku, Lorin.
Spot on, Lorin! :)
BTW this ku would sit well with some of those in the late, great Jane Reichold's collection 'Naked Rock'
Wonderful Lorin, a different image with each rereading, endless possibilities …
Love it, Lorin! I particularly like the way 'walls' and 'shapes' can be nouns or verbs. For me, that's what provides multiple readings and helps to make this monoku so effective.
Posts like this brhgetin up my day. Thanks for taking the time.
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