sere grasses ? summer threads unraveling

sere grasses …
summer threads
unraveling

 

haiku only published in kernelsonline, Summer 2013

 

5 Responses

  1. Mojde Says:

    Unraveling!!

    Very beautiful!

    ——-

    Red carpet

    Otiginated from a passenger train, guiding people on board, a departure.

    Green carpet

    Originates from a return train, bringing back to life the gone!

    It unravels when they resurrect .

  2. andreacecon Says:

    Yes, "unraveling" makes a difference…

  3. martin1223 Says:

    summer shadows
    moonlight shifts the plains

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Magical combination of image and words, Debbie.

    marion

  5. debbiemstrange Says:

    Thank you all for taking the time to share your comments. You are appreciated!

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