moonlight thinned to a single strand—

                                         and still no word

 

 

 

 

(originally appeared in Not Asking What If, Muse-Pie Press, 2016)


7 Responses

  1. Charles DeFanti Says:

    Tiny words with massive footfalls.

  2. Jan Says:

    Wonderful juxtaposition and rich nuance.

  3. Bob Fiorellino Says:

    A powerful combination of mystery and clarity.

  4. poetryofplace Says:

    So much in a breath …

  5. basilcoach Says:

    Such things cross the mind on sleepless nights; and it takes Haiku such as Adele's to express them… magic!

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love the combination of visuals and a hint of mystery.

    marion

  7. MaryJo Says:

    All of the above. Stunning.

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