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first light
touching the arm
of the housebuilder
—JENNIFER BURD
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It's one of those for a couple of seconds things didn't click and then a delightful explosion happened inside me. An uplifting poem, and one to be treasured by its many readers.
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warmest regards,
Alan
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November 15th, 2016 at 10:13 am
Lovely!!!
November 15th, 2016 at 10:19 am
Yes!
November 15th, 2016 at 10:23 am
.
first light
touching the arm
of the housebuilder
—JENNIFER BURD
.
.
It's one of those for a couple of seconds things didn't click and then a delightful explosion happened inside me. An uplifting poem, and one to be treasured by its many readers.
.
warmest regards,
Alan
.
November 15th, 2016 at 12:08 pm
Symbolism galore. Very evocative.
November 15th, 2016 at 1:08 pm
Love the layers.
November 15th, 2016 at 2:57 pm
Ah, sweet!
November 16th, 2016 at 3:40 am
This is a wonderful example of how complex a haiku can be, with the interplay of image and line break and ambiguity. Thank you for this.
November 16th, 2016 at 5:32 am
A beautiful love poem, Jennifer.
marion
February 17th, 2017 at 10:49 pm
Just seen it, very lovely.