meaning what i don’t say ellipsis

 

 


9 Responses

  1. Bob Lucky Says:

    Nice one.

  2. Shloka Says:

    Thank you, Bob! :)

  3. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    I do that . . . !

  4. Shloka Says:

    I'm glad I'm not alone, Marilyn! :)

  5. kalaramesh Says:

    Good one, Shloka
    Unexpected end :)

  6. Shloka Says:

    Thanks a lot, Kala! :) :)

  7. Alan Summers Says:

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    meaning what i don’t say ellipsis

    —SHLOKA SHANKAR
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    I loved this when I first read it here, and it continues to grow in me. We often use/vocalise the American expression "period" which means an end stop (full stop) in grammar to imprint our verbal statement even more. I can see saying "ellipsis" could also catch on!

    Very moody haiku, terrific work, fresh and modern.

    warm regards,

    Alan
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  8. Sheila Sondik Says:

    This one resonates, especially the first word. I keep coming back to it.

  9. marykendall Says:

    This one took me by surprise when I first read it. You really said it all…and I think a lot of us find it resonates perfectly with us. A really good one, Shloka. :)

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