an ice cream cone
shaped by her tongue
sultry evening

11 Responses

  1. Matt Says:


  2. MaryJo Says:

    The music is wonderful following the flow of the tongue and the shape of the cone all at the same time.

  3. Carole MacRury Says:

    Susan, such a lovely and sensual haiku. Love it.

  4. andreacecon Says:

    Yes, absolutely lovely…

  5. Barbara Kaufmann Says:


  6. Padma Says:


  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Wow, Susan! :)


  8. Kala Ramesh Says:

    Absolutely lovely, Susan.

    The image is really strong.

  9. chief276 Says:

    Hot stuff.

    Bill K

  10. janewilliams Says:


  11. Susan Constable Says:

    Thank you all for your gracious comments. I'm delighted this resonates with you and I appreciate the time you took to comment.

    All the best,

Leave a Reply