night pond –
the Big Dipper full
of leaves

 

 

 

(originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)

 


4 Responses

  1. Gary Michael Dault Says:

    Sweet and poignant. Perfect in its way.

  2. magyar Says:

    __ Within the Spring moonlight, we see the new green leaves dancing in that star-form; such a grand life attraction, Zuzanna!

    My echo to complement, in the Autumn we may see and hear:

    the Big Dipper
    empties its fallen leaves
    owls count

    Smiles_! _m

  3. MaryJo Says:

    Thank you. Beautiful to look at.

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    .
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    night pond –
    the Big Dipper full
    of leaves

    (originally appeared in Cattails, May 2016)

    —ZUZANNA TRUCHLEWSKA

    Love the opening line, and the fantastic phrase:

    the Big Dipper full
    of leaves

    Great!

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