blossoms . . .
the dog leap-curves
toward the frisbee

 

 

 

(originally published in Frogpond,Vol. XXX, No. 2, 2007)


11 Responses

  1. janbentexas Says:

    Kala,
    Lots of graceful action in L2 and L3.
    And the blossoms as a backdrop reverberate Spring in the park.
    Well Done.
    Jan Benson

  2. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks a ton, Jen
    Happy you like this ku :))

  3. Padma Thampatty Says:

    An action-packed spring day beautifully caught, Kala! The dog leap-curves upwards, towards the gliding frisbee, and I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences.

  4. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks, Padma.
    Wow! Beautiful comment.
    _/\_

  5. magyar Says:

    __ In your painting Kala, among your blossoms, I imagined a hummingbird that quickly evaded that frisbee's flight. A minimal echo, _m:

    hummingbird
    escapes this spinning frisbee
    a dog's bark

  6. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks, Magyar …
    I like your ku, too.

  7. janewilliams Says:

    Beautifully 'drawn' …

  8. kalaramesh Says:

    Thanks a lot, Jane Williams.
    Happy you like this ku

  9. Alan Summers Says:

    Lots of fun!

    Here's one I forgot I wrote that got picked up by a Russian site:

    the station approach
    a man and his dog training
    for the world cup match

    Alan Summers
    .
    .

  10. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Great movement in this, Kala – and full of the joys of spring!

    marion

  11. hoa tang le Says:

    I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences. Thank post

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