blossoms . . .
the dog leap-curves
toward the frisbee
(originally published in Frogpond,Vol. XXX, No. 2, 2007)
Issue 16.2 | 20 January 2017
Lots of graceful action in L2 and L3.
And the blossoms as a backdrop reverberate Spring in the park.
Thanks a ton, Jen
Happy you like this ku :))
An action-packed spring day beautifully caught, Kala! The dog leap-curves upwards, towards the gliding frisbee, and I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences.
Wow! Beautiful comment.
__ In your painting Kala, among your blossoms, I imagined a hummingbird that quickly evaded that frisbee's flight. A minimal echo, _m:
escapes this spinning frisbee
a dog's bark
Thanks, Magyar …
I like your ku, too.
Beautifully 'drawn' …
Thanks a lot, Jane Williams.
Happy you like this ku
Lots of fun!
Here's one I forgot I wrote that got picked up by a Russian site:
the station approach
a man and his dog training
for the world cup match
Great movement in this, Kala – and full of the joys of spring!
I can see some petals spiraling downwards. The shapes match, yet with the inherent differences. Thank post
Mail (will not be published) (required)
Notify me of follow-up comments by email.
Notify me of new posts by email.
All contents copyright (c) the indicated authors and artists,
except as noted.
. Comments RSS
Log in .